Commentary for Phase 3 Research paper Name
_____ Intro paragraph is developed and contains clear elements
_____ Intro paragraph needs improvement in development or elements
_____ All topic sentences are idea-based not action based
_____ Most topic sentences are idea-based
_____ Topic sentences mostly need improvement
_____ Body paragraphs are well developed with plenty of primary and secondary sources
_____Body paragraphs are not well developed and/or lack enough primary/secondary sources
_____In textual citations are all correctly done including block quotes
_____In textual citations and or the block quote are not all correctly done
_____There is ample explanation from the writer
_____More explanation from the writer is needed
_____Quotes are lead-in or set up well
_____Some quotes are not set up well
_____Most quotes are not set up well
____Conclusion is an effective universal end to the paper
____Conclusion is not an effective universal end to the paper
____Conclusion is a somewhat effective summary of the argument
____Conclusion is not an effective summary of the argument
A= 95 B+ = 88 C+ = 78 D= 65
A- = 90 B = 85 C = 75 F= 55
B- = 80 C- = 70
_____ Intro paragraph is developed and contains clear elements
_____ Intro paragraph needs improvement in development or elements
_____ All topic sentences are idea-based not action based
_____ Most topic sentences are idea-based
_____ Topic sentences mostly need improvement
_____ Body paragraphs are well developed with plenty of primary and secondary sources
_____Body paragraphs are not well developed and/or lack enough primary/secondary sources
_____In textual citations are all correctly done including block quotes
_____In textual citations and or the block quote are not all correctly done
_____There is ample explanation from the writer
_____More explanation from the writer is needed
_____Quotes are lead-in or set up well
_____Some quotes are not set up well
_____Most quotes are not set up well
____Conclusion is an effective universal end to the paper
____Conclusion is not an effective universal end to the paper
____Conclusion is a somewhat effective summary of the argument
____Conclusion is not an effective summary of the argument
A= 95 B+ = 88 C+ = 78 D= 65
A- = 90 B = 85 C = 75 F= 55
B- = 80 C- = 70